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Thursday 18 February 2016

The Spooky House

Once upon a time there was a witch in the spooky house. The house was on a hill. The evil witch was on the hill. The witch went to the forest she went up stairs she saw a zombie was brainy she went home. The witch got the broom she smacked it with the broom a zombie came to visit her.


6 comments:

  1. Hey jade F. I like your amazing picture you made. I like it and it so much to see that from. Room 16 ☺☺😊

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  2. I wouldn't go to visit someone if they smacked me with a broom. I don't think that witch will get many people visiting her.
    Thanks for sharing your story Jade.
    Mrs Garden

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  3. I wouldn't go to visit someone if they smacked me with a broom. I don't think that witch will get many people visiting her.
    Thanks for sharing your story Jade.
    Mrs Garden

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  4. Hi Jade F,Lani here, I like your picture and your story that goes with it.I love that you put juicy words in it.The part that I liked about your story was that The witch lived in a spooky house and she was evil.Keep writing stories about witches

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  5. Hi Jade F,Lani here, I like your picture and your story that goes with it.I love that you put juicy words in it.The part that I liked about your story was that The witch lived in a spooky house and she was evil.Keep writing stories about witches

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  6. Hi my name is sarsha
    i like your work but why is there only one pitcher

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