Narrative writing

Once upon a time there lived gorgeous  princess named Mary. She lived in a castle in the forest.  One morning she made some soup.  Next an evil witch with a green face. She knocked on the door. Then she asked if she can come in she said yes. After that the princess went to go check her friend animals then the wicked witch put something evil in the soup. Then the princess ate the soup and she died on the floor. Finally the wicked witch giggled. She  went out of her house.